Again... Aren't you missing some articles? Are you careful with conjucation of verbs and pronouns' use? I don't think so...Anyway, Take a look at your text and correct your mistakes... By the way... Why do you love soccer? Your sentences are not connected... Please... All my reccomendations are for you to improve, not just for nagging at you... So try to follow them... I like your effort but I think you need more!
Again... Aren't you missing some articles? Are you careful with conjucation of verbs and pronouns' use? I don't think so...Anyway, Take a look at your text and correct your mistakes... By the way... Why do you love soccer? Your sentences are not connected... Please... All my reccomendations are for you to improve, not just for nagging at you... So try to follow them... I like your effort but I think you need more!
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